Do Not Weep

I know I don't have much of a right to grieve over certain things, especially when they're one hundred percent my fault.  But there's a part of me that feels broken today, that has felt broken since yesterday.  Holding a child in my arms, imagining what it might have been like to hold my own child in such a way. What kind of person would I have become if I had had a child?  Could I have changed?  I definitely would never have met Nathan, and I would've been linked to Johnny for life.  That broken feeling, though, comes from the knowledge that I had something beautiful that I hated and then lost.  That knowledge, more than anything, makes me wish that I could go back to those days and change things.  What if I never have another chance?  


I love this poem, and tell myself to believe it will be what that child will say someday even though it makes my heart ache to think it:


Do not stand at my grave and weep,
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush,
I am the swift uplifting rush
of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft star-shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry,
I am not there; I did not die.
- Mary E. Frye

I can't review books worth a crap, but I sure do love 'em.

So, I'm in love with goodreads.com.  I love it.  And, I challenged myself to read 1,000 books this year.  Trust me, once I get on house arrest I'll really have time to read.  Fun.
Anyway, I just finished Cinder by Marissa Meyer, and I really, really loved it.  I know it's one of those things - that "Cinderella Story" thing - but I think I'm a sucker for that, which is probably why I loved it so much.  But it was a nice change after reading City of Bones by Cassandra Clare, not that that wasn't a fun book too, but it wasn't as well written as Cinder.  The crappy thing about this most recent book is that there won't be a sequel until 2013.  Trust me, even though it says "cyborg" in the summary, it's worth a read.  It's fun, sad, romantic, etc.
Anyway, I hit writer's block and cleaned the crap out of the basement.  One of the kids had shoved a bunch of toys/garbage/dishes under the futon I sleep on, so gutted it, sorted everything, and moved the furniture around.  It really looks like a bedroom now.  I set up the futon so that we can put it up when the boys want to play video games, and I can put it back down when I want to sleep.  Billy Collins said it, though.  Cleaning really does get the writing juices flowing.  I've been feeling inspired now for about an hour.  Woot.
I think listening to books is as important as reading them for me.  Sometimes my internal voice gets so jumbled up with my vision of a story that I can't think in words anymore, so when I try to write, I can see the story but I can't put it into words.  I'm not sure that makes any sense, but I know what I mean, and I'm the only one that reads these posts anyway.
I know I should sleep, but I really don't actually want to, and I'm not sure if I should.  I'm afraid that if I do, I'll lose all these words that are piling up inside of me.  I really don't want to go to church tomorrow either, and if I sleep, then it'll be morning and I'll have to go...
Anyway, enough.
Let me make one promise though.  I will never write about robots.  There are only a few people in the whole flipping world that can pull that off without making me want to vomit.  Marissa, let me just say, you are one of them.  Thanks for the story.

Providence

Is it okay for me to be annoyed with other writers?
Okay, I know it is. I feel like an ass thinking this way, but when I read a book, and I like it, I hate it when it slowly gets worse and worse until you know that they seriously pieced the thing together just to make it end the way they wanted.  I know that doesn't make a whole lot of sense, but I'll try to explain it a bit better.
I just finished reading Providence by Jamie McGuire.  I knew what to expect, and I saw the whole story line pretty much ten pages in, but I read because I like to be entertained, and because I live vicariously through other people's romance.  Disappointed isn't the right word, because it was what I expected it would be after I had started reading it.  I think I was hoping it would be better than it was.  The writing feels really juvenile, which works just fine when you're writing for juveniles.  The thing is...okay, children's authors often have to write in a very specific way to reach their audience.  They adapt and manipulate their language and story to appeal to a younger audience.  What I've discovered about a lot of YA authors is that they write YA books because they still think and feel the way they did when they were fourteen.  Writing their stories doesn't require adaptation, because this is how they write.  The immaturity of the writing just seeps through the surface of the story and all through the consciousness of the characters.  Annoyance is probably a better word for how I feel than disappointment.  Annoyance because I can tell that these writers could write better if they just spent more time on developing the story and less time on pounding out emotions and feelings.  What's more is that their male characters are almost always horribly unrealistically emotional and needy.  Men are not emotionally collapsing or emotionally distant.  There are all these other places they exist in between.  YA authors are almost always women, and they almost always depict men the way they wish they were.  No one's doing any teenage girl a favor if they do that.
Now, don't get me wrong, if one of these authors came upon this blog post and felt indignant, saying to themselves, "Let's see her do better", I'm not sure that I could.  I just know that I'm trying to do better than that.  If I wrote that way, I wouldn't let myself settle for that kind of book.  I would rip it to shreds, change it and hone my skills until it was the best that it could be.  Maybe I'm just too much of a perfectionist.  When it's your career, wouldn't you want it to be the best that it could be?  Trying to make it less seems lazy to me.  Sorry, Jamie, your writing makes me feel like you're being really lazy.  That expression really hits the nail on the head.
(about 20 minutes later)
My sister just got back to me about my first 4 chapters of my new book, and I find that asking for her criticism was actually really, really helpful.  I used to hate asking her for her opinion, because I couldn't explain why I was writing things the way I was, but email works well.  Plus, I guess I had to learn that if I ever want my writing to be worth anything, I'm going to need her help.  She did it for my dad, and he got published...
The world feels strange tonight.  I felt it when I woke up from my nap earlier, and I think some of that is because I was reading that stupid book, but I feel like it's early morning, not the middle of the night.  I'm also having a hard time grasping reality.  I'm sure that expression is way overused, because this inability to distinguish reality from dreams feels so completely different than that weird niggling sensation of deja vu because I dreamt something and then it happened.  This is just straight up "I don't know where I am or what time it is" for a long, long time.  Or forgetting that I'm me and not someone else.  I know, I sound like I'm on drugs.  But that's probably the biggest problem.  Whenever I've felt this way before, I would just drink until I didn't feel so off anymore.  I can't do that now, so the world won't right itself.  Weird, right?

Places I've Lived

1. Rapid City, South Dakota
2. Warsaw, Indiana
3. Tandala, D.R. of the Congo, Africa
4. Lincoln, Nebraska
5. Geneva, Nebraska
6. Lincoln, Nebraska (again)
   -  Devonshire House
   - Cuthills Ct.
7. Lulea, Sweden
   - Pilerots
   -  Ottestig's
   - Those mean doctors
   - Those super sweet Germans
8. Lincoln, Nebraska (again)
   - Cuthills Ct.
9. Sioux Center, Iowa
10. Lincoln, Nebraska
   - Cuthills Ct.
   - Husker Village at UNL
   - My awesome, but now dead mini van
   - G St. apartment
   - Beca's dad's house
   - F St. with Ember
   - Grandma Jones' basement
   - H St. apartment
   - Ben and Andrea's basement
   - Prospect apartment
   - Lisa's couch
   - Cuthills Ct.
   - Lisa's couch
   - Dennis and Bethany's basement

Total number of moves: 27 moves in 26 years.  Okay, Spanky, is that a record?

One more thing.
Everything, and I mean everything is so much more intense in those first few months of sobriety.  You forget what it is to feel when you drink all day everyday for months at a time, and you don't really get those feelings back in the short periods of sobriety between binges.  As soon as you've got a few weeks, maybe even a few months under your belt, it all crashes back on you.  I think that's the only thing that scares me right now, because I know that there are certain amounts of emotion that I can't handle, and certain people that can cause chaos and overwhelm me.  David or rather remembering him, Nathan calling, texting, speaking...existing...and a few unnamed others.
I think one other thing I need to get off my chest is that I don't think I want to stop being in love with Nathan.  Loving someone that is so completely out of reach, so completely gone from my life is so much safer than loving no one.  I know I sound like I'm quoting some kind of psychology book, but it's true, isn't it?  It's proving to be true, at least.  I still love him, though, and I don't know how not to love him anymore.  Why is it that so wrong?  Seriously.  What is wrong with that?

No one would initially guess that there are moments of peace, happiness, and occasions of raucous laughter mixed in with the tears and grief of sobriety.  You never, ever believe that at the beginning.  What they also don't tell you is that the grief feels so much deeper when you're sober, because you're not just grieving the people and things you lost; you're grieving the time you lost.  I've lost most of three years.  If I lost another three, could I wrench myself out of a muddy ditch and toss away the bottle again?  Would I even want to?
I used to be obsessed with keeping track of my memories.  In my mind, everything had to fit into a timeline.  Unfortunately, alcohol makes you forget, once there's enough of it in your system, and especially when it's always in your system.  So, now I have to make lists.  Lists and lists and lists.  I can't put things into order by time, but I can put them together that way.  And I'm constantly counting things now.  I suppose that's pointless, but if you woke up one morning with memories of dreams, believing they really happened, you'd keep lists and time lines too.
Okay, even more disturbing than those bits and pieces is how little I've changed in appearance.  I was looking through pictures on Facebook (urgh), and I look exactly the same as I did five, six years ago.  The only major differences is that I now have a few wrinkles, gray hair, and my weight has visibly fluctuated up and down over the years.  I can't really tell how fat I look now, because when I think of myself, I feel small, even if I'm not.  Thank God.  If I worried about how fat I am on top of everything else, I'd really lose it.
I shouldn't read books with sex in them.  I know this is going out into the internet, and maybe there are still a few stragglers that read it, but honestly, I don't give a shit.  I shouldn't read books with sex in them, because it makes me wish I was having sex.  Even worse than that is that I only know a couple of eligible guys, meaning ones that I could have sex with without causing anyone to cheat on anyone else.  And even if I think about them, and having sex with them, I'm pretty sure that I could never enjoy it as much as those stupid girls in those stupid books.  So, I'm stuck here wondering if there's a solution to being sexually frustrated and simultaneously sex-phobic.  I know there's an obvious solution out there that I'm not going to name because that's gross to talk about, but that's not good enough.  And as I sit here, typing this very ridiculous post, I remember being told that sex wouldn't be as big of a deal once I'd gone and finally done it.  And I laughed at this, because I wanted it to be a big deal.  I wanted it to matter when I actually went and had sex.  But it didn't matter, and I didn't love any of the guys I slept with, and the one guy I have loved I didn't sleep with.  Explain that one...actually, don't, because I already know the psychological explanation.  Knowing it doesn't fix anything, just so you know.
I read these stupid teen books, and I catch myself wishing that my life was like that, with all the drama and craziness.  What's sort of funny about that is people think my life has been ridiculously dramatic, and it has been, but it didn't seem like it at the time.  When I reminisce, I realize that it was crazy, some of the stuff that happened.  But now I sit at my computer for two days straight, living here, doing nothing else.  And I don't mind until I read these stupid books, wish I could go out and get trashed, spend money recklessly, and live a life.  Then I remember that I can't live like that, because I tried and failed.
Can you tell that this blog has been my sounding board and my wailing wall for the last ten years?  Because it has been ten years; well, nearly ten years.  A decade's worth of bits and pieces of my life, sitting out here on the internet and read by, probably 20 people at the most.  Interesting.

P.S. I didn't realize that the blog stops at 2008.  I started this back in 2002 when I lived in Sweden, when blogs were new and all the rage, before myspace, before facebook, definitely before twitter (and, so you know, I hate twitter.  I think it's the most pointless thing that ever existed).

Disgust? Nah, I'm probably just being a prude.

I've noticed recently, now that I'm not in a drunken haze for every minute of every day, that I haven't updated my music collection in probably...a really long time, I guess.  And for whatever reason, my lack of interesting and new music is really inhibiting my writing process.
One thing that I've noticed that is also bothering me - though has very little to do with my own writing - is that unique themes in young adult fiction has unfortunately taken a turn for the typical.  Dystopian themes, first person with multiple narrators, and unrealistic romance.  Now, since I personally want to join this genre of literature, I feel that pressure to conform, to write in this way.  The terrible thing about it is that I feel like a sell out at the same time that I feel that I'm writing some of my best fiction.  I think, though, that they've tricked me, those other YA authors, into thinking that writing like them is the only way to get recognized, and then to top it off, publishing companies are backing them up.
Now, I've made a point of recognizing the books I feel have managed to take this fad in YA writing and come up with something interesting and unique.  Each of the books I've read has it's own merits, but honestly the best ones to come out of it all are these:  Divergent by Veronica Roth and Across the Universe by Beth Revis.  Another couple of books that I read (well, listened to.  I cheat.  I haven't read a book in a long time) that I recommend are: Before I Fall by Lauren Oliver and Hold Me Closer, Necromancer by Lish McBride.  As a side note, Hold Me Closer, Necromancer isn't the only part of that book that is a musical reference.  Almost every chapter has a bastardized song lyric that actually goes with the book.  I thought that was pretty awesome.
You know you've been playing the Sims way too much when you start to think that you can work out for an hour in front of your TV and immediately lose weight, or that if you sit down for so many hours, you can finish a book that will get you 1,576 Simoleons per week.  Whatever.  I catch my brain trying to trick me into thinking that I could actually publish a book if I'd just flipping finish one.  Still, I end up listening to these books, and probably over analyzing them to some degree, and I start to think that I'm crazy for ever thinking that could happen.  Then I'll listen to one that actually sucks, and I feel way better because I'm thinking, like a cocky jerk, "I write way better than that person."  Then I'm fine until I listen to another one that is amazing.  Thanks for crushing my dreams, Lauren.  Just kidding.
I found goodreads.com the other day when I was trying to find some good books to listen to, and I joined up today because it occurred to me that, since I've been checking the internet for recommendations every few days, I should just get on a website that does all the work for me.  Genius, right?  I'm such a fast learner.  Anyway, they have this other brilliant thing called book clubs.  Ha.  There are other adults that like to read teenlit?  Wow.  So, yeah, joined one of those (I am getting to my point).  Anyway, I checked out a few writer's blogs, and I found myself feeling disdain once again - I'm being so critical this evening.  Every single writer that I've been admiring lately has that same horrible answer to that same horrible question. You know which question I mean:  What is your advice to young aspiring authors?  Ugh.  Please, don't give them advice.  If they need advice, they can't be that good.  That's what I'm thinking.  On top of that, if you have to tell them not to give up even if they get 10 rejections, then there's something wrong with their writing, and they need to get better at it.
Now, I realize that it's me writing this, not someone that actually has experience getting published or anything. But when I ask for advice, as an aspiring sort of young author, I don't want them to say that.  I want them to say something like, "Try not to make all your characters' personalities just explode out at readers when you write" or "When you write in first person with multiple narrators, make sure your characters have defined personalities that come through your writing.  Don't let them all sound like you."  God, someone needed to tell some of these authors that stuff before they published.  And tell me this:  why did they get published if they can't even do that?
I know I sound really, really superior, and if you know me at all, you probably also know that I get on these kinds of rants.  Mostly I do it to make myself feel better, because, guess what, I'm suffering from an acute case of writer's block, which is totally unfair since the story is RIGHT UP THERE in my head, but I can't get it onto any freaking paper.
Add a headache and the responsibility of making dinner for a couple 12 year olds and a wonky 7 year old, and the challenge almost seems insurmountable. I'm laughing to myself at the moment, though, because I'm so ridiculous.  Here I am, totally sober and happy, unable to write because of all these little things, and yet I know that if someone tossed me a bottle of Captain, my desire to write would fly out the window, and I wouldn't even complain about it once.  Explain that.